Changing the storyline

Because we changed the second location we had to change our storyline. In the new storyline we are keeping the same shots we are taking at colleges, so the happy and bright shots, however we no longer have the bridge in the scenario.

In the night scenes myself and nelson are acting as a couple and then we started to get followed by this other character (played by Ryan). Once i leave nelson the charter follows nelson into the park and then kills him.

Personally i think that there is a more clear storyline with making this change.